Thursday, November 29, 2007

phone calls. (part 2)

I was too scared to pick up my phone. I though that I was just imagining it, but the vibration of my phone buzzed my leg, making it too unbearable to ignore. After the 3rd time he called we were in our 10-minute passing time. I answered my phone on call number 4 and to my surprise on the other end I hear heavy breathing.
“Hello, is anyone there?” I asked talking slow and steady.
I heard more puffing. “Okay, seriously is this a joke? Who are you?” I continued, a little more annoyed in a hushed voice. Finally there was a reply.
“Hello, this is Fei-Chow, we need your help. Where did your father keep his safe of files?” He blurted out with a strict tone. I was hesitant on my reply bit knowing what to say.
I ended up mumbling out the words “Why should I tell you? Who are you? How do you have this number?”
Again the man spoke rudely.
“You will not have any information about this matter, that’s final, answer and no one will be hurt. Now let me ask again, where is his safe?” he said.
I didn’t want to answer the question so I replied with a short answer.
“No, you can’t make me” I boasted. Then I hung up the phone quickly.
I rushed to my next class completely ignoring my friends, I was so confused on what has just happened that I couldn’t hardly think.
My school ended 15 minutes before Charlie’s, so I usually just wait for him.
School ended at 2:45 when I was surprised again by a text. U was just expecting it to be Charlie saying something like “oh I’m going to a friends today, catch you later.” Instead it said “what would you do if you brother disappeared?” I shrieked and ran to his classroom.


To be continued…

5 comments:

Marina's Blog said...

This is a good story because it is descriptive and it puts me on the edge of my seat =). That text she got in the end was really creepy and totally perfect. Good job

patrick p said...

Wow that is scary. I like the way you handled your self in this situation. I feel sorry I hope it doesnt happen again.

Layla said...

intense. i like ti because it was suspenceful

horse@hrt/Marlee said...

i like ur stories linden there really interesting, u should keep this going

Cortney =] said...

Wow i loved this because it was so suspenceful! I also loved the way you left the reader with sort of a question about your brother.